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The eyes on your crow picture are pretty close to non existent, and it makes his face look kind of like a spiderman mask...sorta. The shading is well done, and your inking could be filled in a little more, but the overall anatomy makes up for the small things like that.
I always admired your typography and how your artistic lettering looks, not to mention that the pen and the ink dripping from the page make it work in a 3d effect. I also love the different shades you got from that one pencil and pen.. from white to black.
The main thing I can see you need to work on is the inking needs to be less linear and more circular...flowing, not static-y. Hope this stuff helps and you get back on your feet.
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I always admired your typography and how your artistic lettering looks, not to mention that the pen and the ink dripping from the page make it work in a 3d effect. I also love the different shades you got from that one pencil and pen.. from white to black.
The main thing I can see you need to work on is the inking needs to be less linear and more circular...flowing, not static-y. Hope this stuff helps and you get back on your feet.
Commented on behalf of 's 52 Week Challenge
(Even though its likely me and you won't ever hang out again, I though I would let you know that I still remember the good times. Keep your head up and follow those high ambitions, dude.)